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Landing Page Optimization

Applying storytelling principles to solve user abandonment and drive measurable conversion improvements through strategic UX design and cross-functional collaboration.

Results Achieved

+30%
Overall Conversion Rate
+45%
Email Capture Rate
73%
Payment Page Completion Rate

The Challenge

Why I Was Brought In

The Growth Manager sought out my storytelling expertise to address a critical conversion issue: users were dropping off at the loading bar experience before reaching the email capture page. Customers searching for specific information like a phone number would leave without signing up when they didn't immediately find what they were looking for.

Having exhausted their existing ideas, the Growth Team specifically requested a fresh creative perspective from other arms of the marketing organization. They had witnessed the successes we achieved with social content and believed my storytelling approach could unlock new solutions they hadn't considered.

The Problem: Our loading experience was too short and functional. Users would search for one piece of information (like a phone number), and if they didn't find it instantly, they'd abandon the page before we could capture their email or show them the full value of what we offered.

What Was At Stake: We were losing qualified prospects who could benefit from our comprehensive data, including other contact info, social media accounts, and publicly available information they didn't even know existed. Every abandoned session meant lost email captures and missed opportunities to convert searchers into subscribers.

The Optimization

Here's a side-by-side comparison of the original loading experience versus my optimized solution:

Old Flow
Optimized Flow

My Strategic Solution

As the strategic lead on this initiative, I took a counterintuitive approach: instead of speeding up the loading experience, I made it longer and more valuable. My strategy was to transform what users perceived as "search time" into an experience that built anticipation, communicated value, and revealed possibilities they hadn't considered.

Hands-On Execution

My involvement went far beyond strategy and direction. I personally animated and mocked up the entire flow to clearly articulate how the experience should feel and function. By creating detailed, interactive prototypes, I gave the Design Team a tangible vision they could refine and implement, rather than abstract concepts to interpret.

Core Strategy

Extended Value Communication

Made the loading experience longer to showcase the depth of data we were gathering. This included not just what they searched for, but a comprehensive profile including contact info, social media accounts, and publicly available information.

Creating Perceived Exclusivity

Designed the experience to feel premium and comprehensive, suggesting that what we're delivering is worth the wait.

Revealing Hidden Value

Showed users they might find information they didn't know they wanted. If they couldn't find the specific data point they searched for, there might be something else equally valuable.

Storytelling-Driven UX

Treated the loading experience as a narrative arc that builds anticipation and demonstrates thoroughness rather than just dead time.

The Psychology: By extending the experience and showcasing what we're searching for, users became more invested in seeing the results. They understood the comprehensive nature of our data and were more likely to provide their email, even if they didn't find their original search target, because they saw the broader value we could provide.

Research & Discovery

User Pain Points Identified

Single-Purpose Searching

Users came looking for one specific data point (like a phone number) without realizing we had comprehensive information available.

Quick Exit When Not Found

If users didn't immediately see their target information, they'd abandon before discovering other valuable data we could provide.

Undervaluing Our Service

The fast, minimal loading experience didn't communicate the depth and breadth of data we were actually searching through.

No Discovery Moment

Users had no opportunity to learn about additional data types (social media, other contact info, public records) that could be valuable to them.

Mobile Design Decisions

Based on my research, I created mockups that transformed the loading experience from a point of friction into an opportunity for engagement and trust-building.

Before & After

Old Mobile Flow
Optimized Mobile Flow
Dating Optimized Flow

Design Principles Applied

Extended Value Storytelling

Made the loading experience deliberately longer to show users we're searching through multiple data sources, including contact info, social media accounts, public records, and more.

Perceived Premium Experience

The extended, detailed loading communicated that what we're delivering is comprehensive and exclusive, not just a quick database lookup.

Discovery Messaging

Added copy that revealed the breadth of information available, helping users realize they might find valuable data beyond their original search.

Progress with Purpose

Each loading phase communicated what type of data we were gathering, building anticipation and demonstrating thoroughness.

Secondary Value Proposition

Positioned the email signup as access to this comprehensive data, communicating that even if we don't have their target information, they might find other valuable data.

Implementation & Team Impact

I presented my mockups to the Design Team, walking them through the strategic rationale behind each element. The response was enthusiastic. My storytelling approach opened their eyes to new possibilities.

Design Team Adoption

My mockups didn't just solve the immediate problem. They inspired the Design Team to incorporate more animation and narrative elements in future iterations across other landing pages. This represented a shift in how the team approached UX design, moving from purely functional to strategically engaging.

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